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The animation isn't that good, but it shows so much potential! You have all the right keyframes, all it needs to make it better are smoother tween frames and some more dynamic movement.
The style is absolutely great! It's similar to the DC Animated style they currently have (i.e. the movies and Young Justice especially) which I adore! But... work on your female form! Face was great, but her body was kinda... eh? For one, the breasts were too high up. A common mistake, I did it many times too. Just takes a bit of practice.
Anyway, I hope the best for you and this series. I'm certainly going to stick around to see where you take this.

JTmovie responds:

I'm gonna revamp on the movements, and been planning to on the female designs specifically. Thanks for the constructive feedback!

Wait... like... you made episode 52 FIRST? XD

Ok, voice acting was great. Not much independently made that has good voice acting.
Graphics/CG certainly looks great too, but somehow feeling its missing toon lines (thats just a personal preference though).
Combat animation on the other hand... I'm not sure if this is the first animation you made ever, but it certainly could've been a little better (I think I made better combat animation in my first rendered vid, but I'll let you be the judge of that).

Kel-chan responds:

yeah my 3d animation sucks- i'm not really good

do you know any tutorials?

This is some good quality art and animation here!
Too bad it wasn't longer. Seems almost to be an intro for something more.
Is there more coming?

Vorzy responds:

thanks for the feedback, considering i only had 1 month to actually work on it i can say that i am pretty happy with the 29 seconds of animation, i would be looking into extending it in the future but as of now it is merely a completed school task.
i was planning to start a game concept revolved around the intro and gradually expend the narrative with more cut-scenes as the game progresses, but it is difficult to find any dedicated programmers/coders these days without a cost.

Its probably your first animation, but you should've educated yourself a bit more on the subject before taking on something like this.
Also, improve the sound, its almost impossible to understand what is being said.

canuckboy responds:

Hey Tattorack, yeah it is my first cartoon and I would have liked to do more but I'm not able right now. I am without a computer but am looking forward to another cartoon. Thanks for the advice, I will get it figured out for my next one!

Strange strange strange story.
The model and texture quality is really good though.
But there's a problem with your hair simulator, that or you need to revise the hair textures.
Animation isn't that great either, but you show a lot of promise ^^
Keep making and keep improving!

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

There's a lot in terms of character animation that I need to learn. I'll focus more on the hair and animation (and obviously the story) in my next film! Thanks Tattorack for the helpful feedback and great to know the models and texture quality was good!

By gods what a mess XD
Wish this was somehow longer!

danmarkowitz responds:

Ha, thanks!

I was expecting a little... more.
Animation is impressively smooth with no stiffness I must say though.

Chakra-X responds:

Thanks! But I mean...It does say "cycle" haha, not much more to expect

One of the funniest pun saturated things I've ever seen!
Animation is somewhat simple, but nice. Art is really good and stylish, voice acting is good and the music fits perfectly. ^^

danmarkowitz responds:

Thanks! The next episode is coming out in a few days!

This has a lot of good potential!
Can't wait to see episode I ^^

SkyHawks responds:

Thanks for the kind words! If you'd like to follow the project you can track Sky Hawks here on Newgrounds or like us on facebook.com/GoSkyHawksGo

Awesome music video, really a fun watch ^^

Oh-Sama responds:

You are welcomed, thank you Tattorack ^^

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